Bees Bumble Mint-Bound

Bees bumble mint-bound
those wee mauve scented wonders
fragrance beckoning

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2 thoughts on “Bees Bumble Mint-Bound

  1. The way you’ve placed the words creates a very strong image. The ‘bee’ and ‘wee’ is a nice internal rhyme; the ‘wee’ increases the visual of the small bees; you’ve used the ‘b’s and ‘w’s most effectively; and the rhythm tells the same story as the words. This is delightful.

    Also I like your (new?) tag-line: impromptu words resembling poetry.

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